Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[black ninja (old flash)]

If you knew it was crap, why did you submit this?

It was pretty short, no sound, no preloader. Text was off the screen a bit when the guy talked.

Animation was a bit jerky, but you could see what was happening. Drawings were okay. I hate the anime/manga style of drawing, but I tried not to let that factor in.

1/5

KenSkaii responds:

i want you guys to see how i used to do flash compared to the way i animate now. im glad you didnt let your hate for anime/manga style factor into your reviews. thanks

[Halo 2 Modders]

Kinda annoying to watch

When you're doing voices, make sure you're not breathing into the mike.

Do a bit more animating too. For the most part, all you did was have a static image of some halo guys and putting little sound symbols above the head of the one who was speaking. You can make them move their body and head to show which one is talking. Look at Red vs Blue. Look at POWER RANGERS! Okay, Power Rangers took it a little overboard.

Story was a little boring.

Sound bits were truncated unexpectedly, like the aids song and the other one that was played. The effect it had was bad.

Keep improving, and put more effort into your toon. It's a cliche, but quality is better than quantity. I mean, a little bit of good is far better than a whole of crap.

2/5

Original-SHM responds:

Althought im disappointed you did'nt like it your review was highly constructive. I will wprk on all these things in my next flash.

[[Blobs]]

Oh great. Now I've got that damn song in my head

Quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, COCKADOODLE-DOO!

Aside from the Wiggles song, which distracted me from the toon a little too much, this was alright.

Concept wasn't great. Animation was good and smooth, although that can't be too hard when your characters are circles that don't change shape.

Good effort. Improve your skills and take on a bigger challenge.

3/5

P.S. Loved the ragdoll thing!

Monny responds:

Hmm...

Yeah, I admit my idea wasn't that original, but then again, it was just meant to be a fun little flash.

Bigger stuff is coming.

And yeah, Namzorg's a great programmer.

-monny

[The Lock Show Episode 1]

Funny for a lock movie

I haven't been impressed with many locks, clocks or glocks. To be frank, most of them suck and only survive because of stupid team voting.

This one was okay. The script was a little funny, but animation wasn't really interesting.

With the robot voices... I know it's the style (that you stole from the clocks, as if it was a good style), but please use real voices. Robot voices are so annoying.

3/5

2 points for the script, 1 for the rest.

Robot-Lock responds:

No.

[How Newgrounds Functions]

This was alright!

It gave me a chuckle! Good insight and humour.

This is one of the only flashes that has a reason to be a loop, so I'm not going to take points off for that.

I'd like to suggest you get a good mike to do voice recordings though, because although it made sense to hear robot/computer voices for the clocks and locks, it didn't make sense to hear sticks, tweens, madness characters e.t.c. talking with those dumb voices too.

Oh wait. You're a clock. That explains it. I RE-STATE MY PLEA FOR YOU TO DO VOICE RECORDINGS INSTEAD OF USING COMPUTER VOICES! PLEASE! AND TELL ALL YOUR COLLEAGUES!

I voted 3/5

EvilBerryClock responds:

thanks for the review

[›]

Ahhh! A clock!

Thankfully this was shorter, which meant less annoyance.

Still voted 1, though. Sorry.

l1fty responds:

;)

[Doodle This Bitch!]

Looks like you got bored.

It seems half finished, like you didn't know where to take the story next.

Okay drawings, good animation, good sound. Kinda boring though, because the story didn't go far.

2/5

ryguypie responds:

Well as I've said to another, the story is plain and simple... an animator doodling in his spare time. How many people would actually make a story for their doodles?

[Mi Pueblo]

Ha!

Good drawings, okay animation, great music!

Yeah, with the animation, it might have been better if you did more frames to make it smoother.

Also, when the guitarist and the bearded groupie are dancing, their heads are moving, but their mouths aren't. Try to keep the mouths in the same place on the head, otherwise it looks bodgy.

Oh yeah... thanks for the subtitles. I wouldn't have been able to understand it otherwise... :P

3/5

yonmacklein responds:

thanks for the comment :D and the mouths on the head... is the style man!