Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Do you want this cookie ?]

Huh?

Was something supposed to happen? All I got was some monster saying "Do you want this cookie?" and that's all. If there was more and it didn't load properly, I'm sorry for blamming this.

Put more effort into your toons.

['untitled']

Good drawing style

Nice animation too, but I feel it lacked a good story. It was too short.

The music you put in this is kinda over-used, so you might like to keep that in mind when making a flash.

2/5

[Raar the baby lion]

It was okay

Kinda boring, not a lot of animation.

Backgrounds were interesting because of the style they were done in.

Last bit where the sun took ages to set, with nothing after it, was a bit annoying. In future, make extraneous scenes shorter.

3/5

[B/W Cartoon About Berries]

Creepy!

I liked it, although I wish there was more to the story. Animation wasn't great, but it was good enough.

Good style and good sound.

3/5

[VEIN Act II]

Didn't like it

Drawings were good, but because of the amount of time that would have to be spent on drawing these people, the animation was jerky without having too many inbetween frames.

Voice acting for the girl was pretty bad.

The dialogue writing was pretty bad too. Especially hated "Capiche baby" etc.

3/5 for the amount of work done here.

[Rest in Peace]

This was pretty unentertaining

Great animation, good drawings, good sound.

Concept let this toon down. When it ended, I was sitting here thinking "So what?". Next time go for something that isn't cliched. Cruelty to animals has been done... over and over. Hell, it's what started this site.

It's not shocking anymore, and that's all this toon had in the way of content. Shock value.

2/5

[Doodle This Bitch!]

Looks like you got bored.

It seems half finished, like you didn't know where to take the story next.

Okay drawings, good animation, good sound. Kinda boring though, because the story didn't go far.

2/5

ryguypie responds:

Well as I've said to another, the story is plain and simple... an animator doodling in his spare time. How many people would actually make a story for their doodles?