Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pixels on the Brain]

It was alright

It would have been better if you concentrated your efforts to make each skit as good as it could be, instead of thinking: "Hey, we should add another one!".

One or two made me laugh. The farm one and the frog one come to mind.

3/5 for the work done here, but I think your joke writing could be a whole lot better. Too many "walk-on-and-die" skits and too many fart jokes.

(I rated your style low because 99% of it is not your art)

[Darkwood Productions]

Uh huh

The terms of submission really advise against submitting unfinished work.

This is only a "company" logo sequence. It's pretty good, but it's got absolutely no entertainment value by itself. Try putting a toon behind it next time.

1/5

[Trapped 2!]

Okay

Nice and smooth animation.

Concept had potential, but it just ended up not very interesting. The guy gets trapped too easily and dies too easily. You should give him a way to get out somehow so he can run away from the moving walls, at least, until they stop acting fairly and squish him without hestitation.

2/5

Strange choice of music. It's neither what you'd expect, nor delightfully contrasting. It seems like it was only there to fill some sort of "sound requirement".

[Me Talking to Myself]

Nice movie

What would've made it better would be better recordings of the voices, but I can't even do well with my own toons, so I can't tell you how to do it.

Also, it would've been nice for the sunset to be coloured and detailed beautifully for us to appreciate it more.

4/5

[Warcry of Star Wars]

Ahh! You are tone deaf!

It was okay animation, but not really amusing.

Try to stick to one story line instead of throwing us a bunch of half developed action sequences that don't even relate to each other (save being from the same movie series).

2/5

[Daily2oon07292005]

New Idea...

Make a movie series called "Monthly toon", then you could work on each one for a month, and maybe it wouldn't suck so much.

0/5 until you make something good.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

lol nigga wait for 31st

[The BLAMMED! Collection 3]

There is no such thing as an unfair blam.

If people don't want to watch your crap, then you have no right to make them do so.

Didn't watch this. They were already blammed, so why should I?

0/5

TJN001 responds:

because drt

[Curser]

This was alright

Great graphics, even though there wasn't much of them. Great style of drawing.

Toon was a little short, but I liked it.

You might have liked to include a preloader.

3/5

[Dating Sucks]

Okay

Slighty funny, okay animation. Sound was a little bodgy. Try not to overwhelm the mike by talking too loudly into it.

Lip sync was a big problem and got worse as time went on.

Also, the lip shapes weren't right for the sounds the guy was making when he was talking. There are some good tutorials on lip synching on this site if you want to learn more.

2/5