Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fish Heads!!!!1!]

Unfinished and crappy

The drawings were okay, the animation was pretty boring, the concept was very boring and unfinished.

Sound was really annoying. I can't say this enough to clocks, locks, glocks and whatever else ends in ock... get a mike and do some real voices!

0/5

Don't submit movies that aren't finished.

BellClock responds:

Looks like you're thinking of another movie =(

[Will they fuck?]

A one joke toon...

...but that was alright.

Graphics weren't great, and you could see bits where the colour didn't fill in all of the outlines. Sounds were oddly truncated, which hurt the effect you wanted for your toon.

2/5

You might like to change the title to something less in your face, and say it includes mild adult themes.

[Daily2oon07242005]

Kinda crappy

Oh, but look at the locks, clocks, glocks, socks, rocks, ducks and sucks who think it's good! (What a surprise...) They even thought it was so good, they put everything as ten! Even interactivity, which doesn't make sense.

Yawn.

You guys should put EFFORT into your toons.

A little gem of a toon is much better than a load of rubbish ones.

0/5

[black ninja (old flash)]

If you knew it was crap, why did you submit this?

It was pretty short, no sound, no preloader. Text was off the screen a bit when the guy talked.

Animation was a bit jerky, but you could see what was happening. Drawings were okay. I hate the anime/manga style of drawing, but I tried not to let that factor in.

1/5

KenSkaii responds:

i want you guys to see how i used to do flash compared to the way i animate now. im glad you didnt let your hate for anime/manga style factor into your reviews. thanks

[Smokers beware...]

A little bit of a laugh

You kept it nice and simple. Good job.

The art could have been better and more complex. It was very short too. But I liked this.

2/5

[Halo 2 Modders]

Kinda annoying to watch

When you're doing voices, make sure you're not breathing into the mike.

Do a bit more animating too. For the most part, all you did was have a static image of some halo guys and putting little sound symbols above the head of the one who was speaking. You can make them move their body and head to show which one is talking. Look at Red vs Blue. Look at POWER RANGERS! Okay, Power Rangers took it a little overboard.

Story was a little boring.

Sound bits were truncated unexpectedly, like the aids song and the other one that was played. The effect it had was bad.

Keep improving, and put more effort into your toon. It's a cliche, but quality is better than quantity. I mean, a little bit of good is far better than a whole of crap.

2/5

Original-SHM responds:

Althought im disappointed you did'nt like it your review was highly constructive. I will wprk on all these things in my next flash.

[MMM 1: The Mystery Begins]

Alright

I think you might like to try a faster frame rate to get smooth motion in your animation.

You might also like to have your voice actors to step back a bit from the mike. You can hear them breathing in it.

An okay script with some funny parts.

2/5

[Unfinished Crap]

You've got a good style

A good style of drawing and animating, but you haven't done much with it!

It would have been very interesting for you to pursue the Afraid of the Dark one and draw out a story from it. Except, draw some real characters instead of that stick thing.

I liked the character design and zippy animation style of that Travis guy.

2/5

[[Blobs]]

Oh great. Now I've got that damn song in my head

Quack, quack, quack, quack, quack, COCKADOODLE-DOO!

Aside from the Wiggles song, which distracted me from the toon a little too much, this was alright.

Concept wasn't great. Animation was good and smooth, although that can't be too hard when your characters are circles that don't change shape.

Good effort. Improve your skills and take on a bigger challenge.

3/5

P.S. Loved the ragdoll thing!

Monny responds:

Hmm...

Yeah, I admit my idea wasn't that original, but then again, it was just meant to be a fun little flash.

Bigger stuff is coming.

And yeah, Namzorg's a great programmer.

-monny