Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zandoids Episode1 (pilot)]

This was alright

Animation was good. Could have done with some sound effects to go with the music.

Concept is a little overdone (little thing eats big thing, when it's supposed to be the other way around).

2/5

[Bright Eyes]

Very good art

A bit more animation would have been good, although this toon didn't seem to need it. The gentle pans were very effective.

I thought "The Star Spangled Banner" was a poor choice at the end after the beautiful and emotional "Bright Eyes" throughout the rest of the piece.

4/5

[worm attack!]

Haha!

Short, but I liked it.

Good drawings, alright animation.

2/5

[Seven Ep.1 : 7]

I didn't like it

Try a higher frame rate. This was really jerky.

I liked the drawing of the bird.

This toon was pretty boring. Got better near the end with all the shards raining down.

2/5

[bluehippo = gay]

Do you guys ever learn anything?

This is the same kind of crap that can be expected everytime you submit. Stop trying, because you obviously aren't getting any better.

It's obvious the only people who "like" this are your friends who you've told to vote five.

Lame.

0/5

[Halo: Pramape 343GS]

This was okay

Some things were funny (the crazy guy who shoots at MC, the Python scene), voice acting was okay, but you kept breathing into the mike. Keep that in mind when recording in future.

I loved the Monitor's voice. That was so stupid.

3/5

[Leave It To Bush #002]

Good

I liked to first one better, but this was good too.

Sometimes the sound editing could have been better, because you could hear where some pieces overlapped. This was funny.

Hey, when are the rest of the Non-Livingstons coming? I miss them!

3/5

[Daily2oon08022005]

In light of reading rules 1 and 5 for reviewing...

I'd like to say I try at all times not to make personal attacks or tell people to blam a toon. But that doesn't stop me from saying this "toon" sucks. And boy, does it suck.... (yes, it does).

rambo-16-89: Appropriate choice of music, but this was boring. This concept (random FBFs) has been done many times before and better than this. Next time, try a story.

Skally: Really not funny. Okay style, but this was boring and a little annoying.

actionmes_brother: Both of your "toons" are dumb. They do nothing. They are not funny and they provide no other entertainment whatsoever. Very, very poor.

Yenig: Uh huh. Okay drawings, boring animation. It's a simple loop with no entertainment value.

Golden cat: Okay animation, but this really needs more of a point. It's just not fun to watch.

stick0: Horrible voice acting, nothing funny, and barely any animation.

0/5

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[Daily2oon08012005]

Merely annoying

Food: Good drawings, alright animation. Ending ruined it. It wasn't funny. The toon didn't go anywhere.

Goldencat: Pretty boring. Drawings were okay, animation was okay, concept was stale and has been done to death (characters appears on screen, does little, then gets killed).

Yenig: What the hell is this? Not funny, crappy animation, okay drawing for the second guy. Pretty boring, and I didn't hesitate clicking on the return to menu button.

Starberry: Boring. Give your flash a point.

To all of you... work on a flash for more than a day. Please. The only way you can make good flash is if there has been effort put into it. This is why you have loads of submissions, but no good ones.

And here it comes... because I gave a review telling you I didn't like this, you're going to insult me. Mature. Learn to take criticism.

[A Short Film About Love]

This was okay

The drawings were great, but the animation was just passable. You could see the place where his arm and body were joined together.

Plus, the mouth animation for when they're talking is an interesting style, but I don't think it did the job properly.You could see the real lips behind the scribbles. So I think you should move the top lip above and the bottom lip below where the scribble is to make it look better.

Slightly funny concept. It gave me a chuckle.

3/5