It's okay
I didn't watch all of it because the sound is really shocking and I couldn't stand it. Try to not get too close to your microphone, and don't talk too loudly into it, or it'll overload and make that buzzing sound you keep hearing.
Otherwise, it seemed okay. Graphics were okay but not great, and so was the animation. The spray can with the sun and earth was funny.
Good work (as far as I can tell)
2/5