Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Every Day Hero]

A bit short

Good animation, although it wasn't that long.

There wasn't much entertainment here, though. Almost no story... only one event in the thing.

Good work on the animation, but you've gotta make something more of your skills. Make it longer and give it a story.

3/5

[Jedi Duels]

Boring

I couldn't bring myself to watch the end of this.

The backwards Yoda-speak was really annoying, the jokes weren't funny, and it went on for way too long.

Good animation, good drawings (although I don't like the style), good sounds, music and voice acting.

But this gets a 1/5 for the lack of entertainment value.

[The Message]

Sucks

Drawings were crappy, animation sucked, message sucked.

"Don't conform!" but if I follow this message, aren't I conforming to it? Therefore, I am doing exactly what this message tells me not to do... and therefore am not conforming to it... thereby I am rebelling against the rebellion against conformity! Which makes me... I forget.

Plus, you should really make sure that the whole screen is taken up when you're working on the flash stage. There were white lines on the sides of the screen sometimes. Very annoying and distracting.

0/5

[Mamamia! Diarrhea!]

Pretty bad

Some nice animation, good style of drawing.

But you really need to cut down the repetition of the same bits of animation! Argh! I couldn't stand watching until the end!

The lyrics aren't great. They could be much funnier, and this needed someone singing it. Subtitles just doesn't cut it.

1/5

[Habanero Tale: Past life]

What a piece of crap!

Animation was horrible, drawings were barely passable... and did you say you needed three people to make this?!

I find it especially hard to believe you needed a seperate person to do the backgrounds. I could have drawn those when I was four.

Story was boring, fight scenes were badly animated and directed.

1/5

TacoRemix responds:

i only see one submission by you, a stickfigure, with no backrounds, your animation was good, but i want to see you do a better backround, if you claim you can do better when you were four, make your next flash a good one, and i'll show you some respect.

[The Book of Neezleblix]

Symbolism?

Please... if you want to say that it's a random bunch of crap that doesn't mean anything, just say it. You don't have to hide behind any "symbolism" bullcrap to get a good score.

Animation was great, drawings were okay, style was unique.

I would have given 4/5 for the work here, but the story let you down. A lot. It was boring and had no direction.

2/5

[Who am I?]

Frame by frame, huh?

If it is (at least technically), you might as well have used a whole lot of tweening instead. The girl merely slid across the ground, and the actual frame by frame work was jerky and needed more frames inbetween to make the motion smooth. Try using a faster frame rate than what you used here if you try something like this again.

Also, the song you used stopped before the animation did. Even if that was done intentionally, it breaks the pace of the toon, and I think that harmed it.

A fair bit of effort here (although far less than you make out by calling it a frame by frame animation), but it wasn't a good toon.

1.5

[Dragon]

Not a spoof

This is not parodying anything. Do you know what a spoof is?

Good drawings, good animation, but way too short!

2/5

P.S. Would've made it 3/5, but it's too short. Nothing happens. This is an animation test, not a cartoon.

[Where do clams come from]

Amazing animation

This is excellent work.

I'm a little confused about the clams...

4/5

[Petey The Pigeon]

One rule about jokes is...

...that you don't give away the punch line before you tell it!

I suggest that you remove any comments about "cruelty to pidgeons" from your authors comments box so that the toon is not predictable to any later viewers.

Okay animation, drawings aren't that great. Sound was good for the limited amount of sound you used. Slightly humurous concept.

2/5

Invisiduck responds:

if your gonna be nasty, do it properly not all this animation was ok, drawings arnt that great, come on, you giving me the easy time here, thanks for the 2/5, it didnt even deserve that.....sorry about this i really do have to stop being so damn moody today, thank you for the review.