Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Roy Dillinger - Prologe]

Interesting

I didn't think it would be good when I first starting watching it, but it got more interesting and drew me in. Nice story.

Animation is alright, although I wouldn't call it great. For the most part, it seemed like I was reading a comic book that moved a little.

Good drawings, good style. Voice acting was a little stale. I know you're going for a solemn P.I. voice, but even they show emotion (other than cynicism) in their voices sometimes.

I look forward to seeing more of this series.

Andy-Parker responds:

Thanks, I'll take all that on board when continuing the series.

[Deciduous]

Wow!

Very nice, smooth animation. Good concept, good music.

It lets my spirit soar... and say aww.

:p

[FBF Madness SE]

Find a direction

This is alright, and I appreciate how much effort goes into frame by frame stuff. But this really didn't grip me because there was no story and no real direction.

Things morphed into and out of existence for the most part, but it would be good if you took one thing and animated it and made it do stuff before disappearing or turning into something else.

Make it interesting. Give it a theme, a basic idea, or a story for the viewer to follow.

Rubbertje responds:

That is just NOT the FBF Madness style.. This is for people who like randomness! ;)

[The Thing : Part 1]

Boring

Not much of a story, or action. You tried to do both, but it felt like you neglected both elements.

Nothing original here, graphics were poor except for the guns, animation was alright, but then again nothing much was happening.

Sound was only music and the occasional sound effect. Try using voices as well.

Keep improving your skills and write something that's original for you to animate.

[Numa Coop]

Not bad

The lip sync was good, and I liked the headbanging.

There wasn't a lot happening here, though. You could make it more interesting.

[DNR-01-01]

Kinda boring

There was no story, nothing interesting, and it wasn't funny.

Could do with some work on the lip-sync, plus, just because you couldn't see the alien's mouth, doesn't mean you shouldn't have moved him at all while he was speaking. Try moving characters when they talktoo add a sense of realism, otherwise it's a bit static.

[MGS3: Boss Failures]

Not really funny

I've never played the metal gear games, but I don't think that matters. It's not that funny.

Good drawings and adequate animation.

[Flowers are evil]

Alright for your first

The drawings were alright, the animation was good for someone who's starting. I liked some of the frame by frame work.

Concept was good, but I'd like to suggest that you try angles other than a side-on view. It can get stale looking at a woman walking from one edge of the screen to the other.

[The Son Of God]

Even with the offensiveness aside...

... this flash hasn't got much to offer. It really wasn't that funny, and it wasn't interesting either. Animation and drawings were alright, though.

You'll be alright with a better concept.

EricSullivan responds:

I actually agree with your opinion and find it valid.

This shorty is not one of me and Sean's best work.

[Malltime Musings 3]

Alright

The animation is alright, the humour is good (in parts), and the drawings don't suck.

Good effort, but it could be funnier.