Renegade-Hamster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Story Tag 2b: Blown Away]

Funny

Great animation and drawings, sound is great and I loved the reference to "Phantom".

4/5

[Link vs Darklink]

Exciting

Great animation and drawings, good sound, interesting writing.

Although, I think you over-used that fire movie clip!

3/5

[Pass the lightsaber]

Kinda boring

Most segments were very similar in content and purpose. It would have been better if you wrote your own parts with each other knowing what the others were doing so you could do something original with the lightsaber, (Like how in one segment, Darth put the saber down his pants to "compliment" his physiqe). Most of the time it was "Get saber, kill something, pass it on", which got boring very quickly.

Also, each segment should have had it's own music. It is extremely annoying to hear "Duel of the Fates" seven millions times in a row, especially when the only reason you used it is because it's from Star Wars, and not because it was appropriate for the toon.

Some segments were well animated, (one or two), but most had very simple graphics and basic animation.

2/5 (A high two, though)

P.S. After the toon had finished, it inexplicably started playing from the middle of the first segment. You can fix that easily.

[Gravlin Ep.1]

Dumb use of sound

Get rid of them. They serve no purpose but to annoy. The story (what story?) sucked.

[Lilium]

No animation

This is almost a slide show, save the pans.

The dialogue written is in that beautiful old style, and the look of the thing is great, but I can't get interested in this.

Because you cut your story, you have failed to give me a reason to get interested in the remainder of it.

3/5, but all those points are for the artwork.

[The Chadwicks: Episode 1]

Boring

Very cliched storyline, nothing funny, bad sounds and sound usage.

Great drawings and animation, but this was pretty boring.

Write a story worth animating.

2/5

[Pointless crap!]

Not bad

You've got a good style of drawing, and the animation was alright.

You need to have a longer story, though. But this was good.

3/5

[Toad's Cookies]

Okay

Okay animation, good sprites, good sounds.

Story could have done a lot more with the premise of Toad getting some cookies from a high shelf. Warner Bros made a whole industry out of cartoons where a character does many crazy things to get what he/she wants (I'm thinking Wile. E. Coyote, Sylvester the Cat, Yosemite Sam, etc).

Your toon didn't go very far in exploring the possibilities, so I was disappointed. How it ended didn't really make sense either.

2/5

[Perpetual Motion]

Ha!

Hilarious and excellent in animation, drawing and sound.

Good job. 4/5

[sonic movie madness 3.2]

Dumb

Crude drawings, okay animation, dumb story, dumb jokes.

Really crappy sound quality. There's a lot of fizz on the sound track, and the voice actors are too close to their microphones. Tell them to move back a bit.

2/5

RogerregoRRoger responds:

okay