Frame by frame, huh?
If it is (at least technically), you might as well have used a whole lot of tweening instead. The girl merely slid across the ground, and the actual frame by frame work was jerky and needed more frames inbetween to make the motion smooth. Try using a faster frame rate than what you used here if you try something like this again.
Also, the song you used stopped before the animation did. Even if that was done intentionally, it breaks the pace of the toon, and I think that harmed it.
A fair bit of effort here (although far less than you make out by calling it a frame by frame animation), but it wasn't a good toon.
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