Score: 10

"lol that was so funny"

submission: Sonic Shorts Volume 3

date: June 6, 2008

i lieked it when you had videog games characters doing things they normally wouldnt and sometiems died lololololololl

Score: 10

"ZOMG"

submission: More Brawl Taunts

date: June 5, 2008

I like the swearing and bits where you talk about video gams. They aer funny.

Score: 5

"Pretty heavy handed"

submission: Watch Out Obama

date: June 1, 2008

I think it was too heavy handed, and didn't really wander much further from obvious.

Score: 10

"Very good"

submission: Journeys of Reemus

date: May 16, 2008

Beautiful graphics, odd puzzles that test your brain, and a satisfying ending.

Please tell me that your next game will be a continuation of this series!

Score: 7

"Fun, and the Foo Fighters wrote a song for WHO?"

submission: Gravity's Just a Theory

date: January 23, 2008

Wow, they wrote a song about the Beaconsfield miners? That's really nuts! :D

In Australia, we got "updates" about the miners every two minutes, telling us that they were still trapped down there in the mines. But apparently Foo Fighter music got them through some of the tough times they went through (not as tough as it was on the news viewing public mind you... :P), and I guess Foo Fighters heard about it, and wrote them a song... haha. Funny, I never knew that.

The actual review where I'm not raving about nothing:

Fun little brain storming cartoon. I liked this a bunch!

Score: 7

"Hahaha! Funny!"

submission: The Kring

date: December 23, 2007

A nice parody.

The animation was of good standard, and the graphics were okay.

Score: 6

"A standard trailer"

submission: Phase Ten 2.0 Trailer

date: December 23, 2007

This should probably be sent to Newground Alphas, not the main portal.

Critique:

The animation looks alright, but the background is pretty sparse, and could be made more interesting.

The different characters are hard to discern, because their only difference is colour. If you plan on having an actual plot besides fighting, it would be good if you could find a way of differentiating them more, so the audience knows who's who.

Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! :)

Score: 4

"Needs work."

submission: ULTIMATE sheep toss

date: December 13, 2007

What you need to have is a hill or other obstacle in the middle, so that the game is actually about calculating angles and distances while compensating for the wind, and not just a simple case of aiming directly at your opponent and using full power.

Score: 5

"Some problems"

submission: TD: Demenius' Darkness.

date: December 3, 2007

You've designed it so that you go back to the beginning of the level if you touch a bad guy. It makes for some really annoying gameplay.

The jumping is a little slow, and it doesn't correspond to how long you hold down the jump key. e.g. just tapping it and holding it have the same effect: a really big slow jump.

I understand if you need to study programming a bit more, so please don't take my criticism as an insult. I'm just telling you what needs to be improved.

Score: 6

"Funny stuff"

submission: Charlie Brownstain Xmas

date: December 1, 2007

But Christmas isn't actually celebrated on the date of Jesus' birth. It celebrates the birth of Jesus, but nobody knows exactly when his birthday was.

OH NO! I RUINED THAT JOKE!

Anyway, this was hilarious, and the voice-acting was good.